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Sketchbook: SLAM by ~Xero-Tau:iconXero-Tau:

Categories Cartoons & Comics > Traditional Media > Cartoons > Drawings

©2005-2009 ~Xero-Tau
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a try at graff with a pose. It turned out alright, but all crits are most welcome!

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~leondog Mar 12, 2005, 3:37:57 PM
The words from a design sense takes alot away from the character. i think a little seperation between the two would set this off.

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~KatTheGrrreat Mar 12, 2005, 7:17:52 PM
dude.. i swear... you're OBSESSED with the concrete block dude :rofl: ... I definitly have to agree with ~leondog about the lettering.. You really can't tell what it says, and the picture is overall confusing.... Ah well.. ...Umm.. Nice perspective! :D I like his fingers.. they're cool.

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~Xero-Tau Mar 13, 2005, 1:11:04 AM
I was drawing dudes with hoodies like BEFORE CB :paranoid:

and hmm, i think I feel ya on the lettering and char compo, I'll work on that.
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~teapot-phx Mar 13, 2005, 3:37:16 PM
You know what? ..... This would look most awesome as a comic. I mean if you used the whole concept of useing graffiti for action sounds and things of that nature. I would love to see you try something like that.

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~Xero-Tau Mar 13, 2005, 4:03:48 PM
Oh wow man, that idea is amazing. Im gonna get with my crew and try to start somethin like that up.

Great thinkin bro, I love it
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~teapot-phx Mar 13, 2005, 4:37:50 PM
I'll tell ya what else I think of it once you post something up! XD

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"You do realize that the pitch-fork of doom is prohibited by law in all states except Hawaii (for some reason) .... Now put that away and grab your pitch-fork of sever irritation before a cop shows up." ~tea
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~xjdm Mar 15, 2005, 3:34:08 PM
looks good, great gallery in all too!

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~lost-soul49 Mar 16, 2005, 12:48:34 PM
the word is awesome. love your graphitti is really getting better.
the guy is cool but i agree that if they were a little bit seperated to also give some focus to the guy, unless your main focus was the SLAM.
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~Xero-Tau Mar 16, 2005, 1:09:14 PM
The character was to compliment the words, not the words giving action to the character.

Guess I mighta messed up a lil bit... Thanx
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